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:icongm2:
My deal would be wanting to see it cropped tighter at the bottom. Like about a third off the bottom. You do that and it solves the problem of the huge over exposed streak. It brings the figure down out of the center of the frame and gives the picture some motion and energy. That's really about the only thing. I could see wanting the complete hotel sign on the left hand side but its not that big of a deal to me. All in all its a great shot and definitely has that "classic" feel to it. Nice job.
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:icontalkingdrum:
Brilliant capture full of atmosphere. I love the way the lights overhead lead the eye down towards the central figure. One or two things bother me about this picture that leave it just short of being a classic. I think the contrast is a little too extreme in the bottom half of the picture. Personally I would have liked to see a little more detail and texture in the reflection on the pavement, the area that has clipped to white, it’s just a little too big. The fact that the sky has gone to white and there is no detail is of no consequence, especially as it is broken up with the overhead lights but our attention is really drawn to the figure and that big white space in front. By contrast the shadows of the lower half of the buildings have blocked out a little too much and again I would have liked to see a little more detail, the areas of pure black are just a little too large. I don’t know the reasons for the crop but I’m also left with the feeling that I want to see just a little bit wider.
I fully appreciate the difficulties in trying to capture a scene of this dynamic range and in the circumstances a job very well done. If this was one of my pictures it would be one of which I was very proud indeed.
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NIKON CORPORATION
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Dec 20, 2008, 12:42:45 PM

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